[PATCH 04/14] doc: Fix grammar and typos.

Jamey Sharp jamey at minilop.net
Sun Jun 5 22:46:21 PDT 2011


On Mon, Jun 06, 2011 at 02:25:02AM +0200, Cyril Brulebois wrote:
> --- a/doc/smartsched
> +++ b/doc/smartsched
> @@ -104,7 +104,7 @@ into select; ReadRequestFromClient causes the server to yield when the
>  client request buffer doesn't contain a complete request.  When
>  that buffer is executed quickly, the server spends a lot of time
>  in select discovering that the same client again has input ready.  Thus
> -the server also runs busy clients less efficiently than is would be
> +the server also runs busy clients less efficiently than it would be
>  possible.

This hunk is an improvement, but I think still needs something. The best
I've come up with is to delete "is"/"it" entirely.

The rest of this patch looks good:
Reviewed-by: Jamey Sharp <jamey at minilop.net>

Jamey
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